Once upon a time, in a
small village near the forest, there lived a giant. He was a very nice giant; big,
strong and helpful. Nobody knew how he came to the village, or how long he has been around. He lived near the villagers, as one among them(or so he thought), helping them out and
living an ordinary life.
One fine morning the
giant felt bored as he had nothing much to do.(infact he never had, unless some
heavy logs blocking the road needed moving or the elephant went mad or the
likes..) Though he normally spent his free time in the forest, he thought
otherwise that day. He strolled along the dusty path leading to the village
from his big thatched hut, the village visible across the stretch with the
forest in its backdrop. He wondered why he was never invited to the village unless there was any work. He was a giant and giants dont have deep thoughts, this thought also just passed over.
He reached the village, and at once felt unwelcome. There was something wrong... terribly wrong. All eyes were upon him, as if stopping just short of asking him why he was there. Had he done anything wrong??, he thought.
He passed the kids playing marbles, and for a change, they all were howling and laughing at him. The elders hurried to silence them and the eeriness was back. The prying eyes of ‘gentlemen’ followed him, till he was round the corner. And then there was the potter, the butcher and a set of familiar faces, cold and pale, (with fear?) who normally would have smiled in admiration (?). Doors were shut as he passed each house, and the village head who normally calls him for work ran away on seeing him. "What's wrong with these people?, I am just visiting them for a change..", he thought...
He was seeing the villagers for the first time....
His footsteps sounded heavier as he reached the other side of the village.
The noxious mixture of fear and suspicion had weakened him, confused him. He was blind to the serenity of the woods as he thought, thought forcefully for the first time....
He reached the village, and at once felt unwelcome. There was something wrong... terribly wrong. All eyes were upon him, as if stopping just short of asking him why he was there. Had he done anything wrong??, he thought.
He passed the kids playing marbles, and for a change, they all were howling and laughing at him. The elders hurried to silence them and the eeriness was back. The prying eyes of ‘gentlemen’ followed him, till he was round the corner. And then there was the potter, the butcher and a set of familiar faces, cold and pale, (with fear?) who normally would have smiled in admiration (?). Doors were shut as he passed each house, and the village head who normally calls him for work ran away on seeing him. "What's wrong with these people?, I am just visiting them for a change..", he thought...
He was seeing the villagers for the first time....
His footsteps sounded heavier as he reached the other side of the village.
The noxious mixture of fear and suspicion had weakened him, confused him. He was blind to the serenity of the woods as he thought, thought forcefully for the first time....
He stood there,
alone; or so he felt, for the first
time…The air was thick with the juicy smell of ripe wild mangoes, but stood
shy of those giant nostrils. So did the morning sun and the velvet greenery, that
failed to catch his misty eyes. He remembered those faces, worse; he felt
the hatred, the suspicion, admiration- the weird, disguised fear in all forms beneath those
faces. May be he had been merely looking all
these years and not seeing. He wished
he hadn’t seen. For it made the
difference.
It was a day of several firsts. He found his eyes rather moist,
no, wet for the first time in his life.the bulging tears obscured his vision
and burned his eyes.. He shut his eyes to empty them, save the pain. The tears rolled down
his cheek and fell and fell and fell… till it splashed softly on a bright red
rose…
The giant opened his
eyes, lowered his eyes and saw her, the beautiful red rose. The tear drops,
round and glittering in the warm morning sun somehow augmented her beauty, as
if she was wearing a necklace of diamonds. He stood there, dumbfounded by the
beauty that was pressing into his eyes, which instantly cleared his simple little mind. The serenity of the woods and the smell of the ripe mangoes sneaked in, past his distracted mind.
(The rose was all alone.
She was new to this world. She had been told by the wise big trees that she’ll
wither and fall, like the ones before her, and after her. She was longing for
some joy, some alteration to the cruel monotony contrasting her charmed
existence. She was waiting for him, unaware of the fact that it was him.)
The rose opened her
eyes, half annoyed on being waken up and half puzzled. She was surprised to see the giant with
tear stains standing near her, watching her in admiration. Why would anyone strong as the giant cry?, she wondered. She felt pity and asked
politely, “were you crying?”...
The words were so simple, so plain, and the voice so sweet, yet the giant felt his barrage of emotions broken by a mighty blow. None had cared about his feelings, let alone ask how he felt. He was either feared, hated or admired(feared). He got down on his knees and broke down. Words came broken, forming sentences and then to a full-fledged conversation... no, it was rather him talking. He spoke of his immediate misery, his horror on knowing the truth and the pain of being hated and feared. He went on like a child, telling her all the little things, of how he had tamed the wild elephant which ran into the village, of how he had moved huge trees to clear the path,of how he had chased away the pack of wolves with a simpe roar... all those things he had done for his villagers...
no, THE villagers.
The words were so simple, so plain, and the voice so sweet, yet the giant felt his barrage of emotions broken by a mighty blow. None had cared about his feelings, let alone ask how he felt. He was either feared, hated or admired(feared). He got down on his knees and broke down. Words came broken, forming sentences and then to a full-fledged conversation... no, it was rather him talking. He spoke of his immediate misery, his horror on knowing the truth and the pain of being hated and feared. He went on like a child, telling her all the little things, of how he had tamed the wild elephant which ran into the village, of how he had moved huge trees to clear the path,of how he had chased away the pack of wolves with a simpe roar... all those things he had done for his villagers...
no, THE villagers.
The little adorable rose
listened. She had heard from the trees, the birds.. but
now she listened, to the agony of the
mighty giant, his loneliness, his adventures, his pain and to his hurt gentle mind beneath the tough physique…
Sun arched over and fell,
the moon and the stars appeared in the sky, and true conversation began to
shape up. She didn’t talk much; she never knew how to. She told him she was not
afraid, since she’d grown in the midst of bigger trees. She told him that there
was not much in her life that she can talk about. She talked about her ignorance, her silly concerns and her mundane loneliness . She wanted to hear, she loved
to hear, of a life and world she’d never seen, or never would, and the giant was more than happy to entertain her silly doubts and queries. Her rare beauty in loneliness charmed him, as his rough adventures her. It was the convergence of divergences, the union of fire with water and day with night... the twilight was indeed magnificent...
His pain reflected on her petals, as a tiny red diamond sparkled in the moonlight, the giant's tears long gone. His joy frothed the air with her smell. Love dawned that night, eclipsing the full moon, for it was brighter. The pair of the two made even the stars jealous.
His pain reflected on her petals, as a tiny red diamond sparkled in the moonlight, the giant's tears long gone. His joy frothed the air with her smell. Love dawned that night, eclipsing the full moon, for it was brighter. The pair of the two made even the stars jealous.
For the giant it was as
if God has skipped the routine and jumped to midnight right after daybreak. He hadn’t
eaten or slept but felt fresh and alive. He didn’t want to go back to the
village or the villagers, the huge outline of his hut looked unwelcome for the first time in his life. Meanwhile the
rose was dwelling on her giant’s
life, laughing and crying with him, living a full life in a day unlike the ones
before and after.
“Are you sleepy?” asked
the giant, to his rose. The rose
smiled and said, “No, but you need to.” The answer soaked down to him slowly;
he felt his cramps, swollen eyes, sticky, sweaty body and aching stomach longing for
food. He felt weak and sleepy, as if she had sung him a lullaby. He smiled sheepishly
and said, “You’re right. But I don’t want
to go back.. not today.. not ever…”
The rose gave him her
biggest smile, he didn’t need her ensuing words, “The forest belongs to no one,
whoever feels home here, is home.” to decide what he should do. He wished her goodnight and slept beside her.
He slept, ..slept as if he
had never really slept ever in his
life. His dreams were a flood of colours, of life in the forest, of wild
mangoes, of everlasting conversations with his
rose, of the softness of her petals over his rough palms, of the two most
unlikely souls ever to be in love…
He opened his eyes, the
sun was blazing directly above him. “Ouch!!”..... Pain… something was terribly wrong…
he sat upright and again.. “Ouch!!” Something
had made him bleed…he turned back…the unholy mess pierced his eyes, and stabbed
his heart.. he collapsed, unable to grasp the horror, unable to cry, paralyzed
in shock…
Before disappearing into
oblivion, he heard somebody running, and a distant cry, “ the monster had
crushed the rose!!!!!”.
Awesome da :) keep going :)
ReplyDeleteTouching. Really good one.
ReplyDeleteLooking forward to more such superior works. :)
Macha kalakundu keto!
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thank you folks :) just takin a break from e-life.. will be back with more after some months.. :)
ReplyDeletenice work da..... intense.... :)
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